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Six Years
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Once I stood here gazing with a strangers eyes.
It's been six long years since then and I've grown citywise.
Look to the sky above, six long years of grey
But I am running now into light of day...
Six long years ago I was first upon the shore.
No idea what I wanted, found what I was looking for.
Open sky, open dreams on the prairie plain.
But I had to leave for city and my heart was blind again.

It's been six long years, six years too long.
It's been six long years, six years too long.
Six long years but my heart is strong.
It's been six long years and I have proved them wrong.

These six long years I have lived in hell.
Countless tales of dreams smashed, too many here to tell.
But the landlords always happy, so long he gets his dough.
Who see's the child on the streets, who reaps the wind they sow?
Who amongst us had a feast and who had to scrape the bread?
Who here slept in mill and who slept on their bed?
These shoes I do own, along with clothes I stand in.
But my heart was harder to save, all my dreams a foundering...

It's been six long years, six years too long.
It's been six long years, six years too long.
Six long years but my heart is strong.
It's been six long years and I have proved them wrong!

Six long years in city now I leave the dragons den.
Vacant eyes of empty dreams I shan't see again!
All the romantic dreamers bailing out their ship
Struck the rocks of corporate greed, now nothing can save it.
Six long years ago I walked their beaten track...
But my aspirations count for nothing and the city turned its back.
So I turned my back on the city and hope others see my wake.
Return to my prairie plain where I have peace to make...

It's been six long years, six years too long.
It's been six long years, six years too long.
Six long years but my heart is strong.
It's been six long years and I have proved them wrong.

The ones who made it in the city are the ones with hearts of stone.
©2007-2010 ~DdraigCymraeg
:iconddraigcymraeg:

Author's Comments

Ehh, it flowed out the pen without my control. 40 minutes of daydreaming through the window produced this.

Dedicated to Stuart A. Seven waves my friend. Peace and Godbless.

PS: They've 'Come up Screaming'.

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:iconbleupearl:
You have always a beautiful way with words my draakje and I hope that one day I can hear this lyrics in a song.

P.S. sorry for being away so long.

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:iconj-mobius:
very nicely written. I invite you to check out my portrait of Stuart. [link]

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:iconddraigcymraeg:
No worries at all. Now its my turn - constant exams. Yippe. *sigh*
Thankyou very much for your kind words, this song means alot to me personally.
Anyway,now you are back I have some inspiration to write again! ^^

Bleupearls draakje, foreever and allways.
DD.

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:iconddraigcymraeg:
I hope you don't mind... I have that picture printed off and stuck in my planner for the last four months! Was a great inspiration, thankyou.

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:iconj-mobius:
I don't mind. thank you. I wish I could find more high res images of him to work from.

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:iconthoughtworks:
It's really good this :wow: .. I love it! :D

Keep up the good work XD

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:iconddraigcymraeg:
Will do! You wait till I get my next 'batch' up here! Yep. I've lot to say about rocks...

(Mad laughter. Mwahahaha!!)

Cheers for the comment. have a great day, DD

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:iconchoumicha:
Aah you touched my heart with your words again! :heart:
I don't know what to say except for Well Done!!! :hug:

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:iconddraigcymraeg:
Thankyou *Nods*
This is one that can recte from memory =D My school band used it this year to, so in a way it's come full circle - I wroteto remember the greatest poet I ever knew. Thankyou from the heart for taking the time to read it.

Robs :hug:

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